Update Mission280Solutions.ipynb

Mission280Solutions.ipynb

@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@
     "- Slim Jim Bites (Blues)\n",
     "- Meteor and the Girls (Pop)\n",
     "\n",
-    "It's worth keeping in mind that combined, these three genres only make up only 17% of total sales, so we should be on the lookout for artists and albums from the 'rock' genre, which accounts for 53% of sales."
+    "It's worth keeping in mind that, combined, these three genres only make up 17% of total sales, so we should watch for artists and albums from the \"rock\" genre, which accounts for 53% of sales."
    ]
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@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@
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-    "While there is a 20% difference in sales between Jane (the top employee) and Steve (the bottom employee), the difference roughly corresponds with the differences in their hiring dates."
+    "While there is a 20% difference in sales between Jane (the top employee) and Steve (the bottom employee), the difference approximately corresponds to the differences in their hiring dates."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -771,7 +771,7 @@
     "- United Kingdom\n",
     "- India\n",
     "\n",
-    "It's worth keeping in mind that because the amount of data from each of these countries is relatively low.  Because of this, we should be cautious spending too much money on new marketing campaigns, as the sample size is not large enough to give us high confidence.  A better approach would be to run small campaigns in these countries, collecting and analyzing the new customers to make sure that these trends hold with new customers."
+    "Because the amount of data from each of these countries is relatively low, we should not spend too much money on new marketing campaigns because the sample size is not large enough to give us high confidence. A better approach would be to run small campaigns in these countries, collecting and analyzing the new customers to make sure that these trends hold with new customers."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -780,7 +780,7 @@
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-    "## Albums vs Individual Tracks"
+    "## Albums vs. Individual Tracks"
    ]
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   {
@@ -897,15 +897,15 @@
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-    "Album purchases account for 18.6% of purchases.  Based on this data, I would recommend against purchasing only select tracks from albums from record companies, since there is potential to lose one fifth of revenue."
+    "Album purchases account for 18.6% of purchases. Based on this data, we should not purchase only select tracks from albums from record companies, since there is potential to lose one fifth of revenue."
    ]
   }
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