Update Mission218Solution.ipynb

Mission218Solution.ipynb

@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "# US Gun Deaths Guided Project Solutions"
+    "# U.S. Gun Deaths Guided Project Solutions"
    ]
   },
   {
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "# Introducing US Gun Deaths Data"
+    "# Introducing U.S. Gun Deaths Data"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "# Removing Headers From A List Of Lists"
+    "# Removing Headers from a List of Lists"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "# Counting Gun Deaths By Year"
+    "# Counting Gun Deaths by Year"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "# Exploring Gun Deaths By Month And Year"
+    "# Exploring Gun Deaths by Month and Year"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "# Exploring Gun Deaths By Race And Sex"
+    "# Exploring Gun Deaths by Race and Sex"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -271,9 +271,9 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "## Findings so far\n",
+    "## Findings So Far\n",
     "\n",
-    "Gun deaths in the US seem to disproportionately affect men vs women.  They also seem to disproportionately affect minorities, although having some data on the percentage of each race in the overall US population would help.\n",
+    "Gun deaths in the U.S. seem to disproportionately affect men. They also seem to disproportionately affect minorities, although having some data on the percentage of each race in the overall U.S. population would help.\n",
     "\n",
     "There appears to be a minor seasonal correlation, with gun deaths peaking in the summer and declining in the winter.  It might be useful to filter by intent, to see if different categories of intent have different correlations with season, race, or gender."
    ]
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "# Reading In A Second Dataset"
+    "# Reading in a Second Dataset"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "# Computing Rates Of Gun Deaths Per Race"
+    "# Computing Rates of Gun Deaths Per Race"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -436,14 +436,14 @@
    "source": [
     "## Findings\n",
     "\n",
-    "It appears that gun related homicides in the US disproportionately affect people in the `Black` and `Hispanic` racial categories.\n",
+    "It appears that gun-related homicides in the U.S. disproportionately affect people in the `Black` and `Hispanic` racial categories.\n",
     "\n",
     "Some areas to investigate further:\n",
     "\n",
-    "* The link between month and homicide rate.\n",
-    "* Homicide rate by gender.\n",
-    "* The rates of other intents by gender and race.\n",
-    "* Gun death rates by location and education."
+    "* The link between month and homicide rate\n",
+    "* Homicide rate by gender\n",
+    "* The rates of other intents by gender and race\n",
+    "* Gun death rates by location and education"
    ]
   }
  ],
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@
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+   "version": "3.8.5"
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